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Old 04-22-2016, 06:39 PM   #127
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Originally Posted by Dagnabit View Post
Pretty much.
See, I'd do the code thing more like this:

When Leia assumes command she is presented with the codes; two physical devices that are meant to be similar to the "football" - POTUS nuclear launch codes device. She gives one to Finn immediately because they have to be attuned to a specific person to work and she trusts him completely by now, and a code device has to be activated according to protocol, but she's busy. He says he'll guard it with his life and goes to the code chamber. Chala goes with him.

Chala makes a sarcastic remark about how she only hooked up with him because he is going places, everybody laughs, ha ha ha. They get to the chamber and the guards stop them, a bit rudely. Finn tells them what's going on. They call Leia and she bitches at them, orders the guards to treat him well, telling them that Finn is an extension of her because he's the only one she trusts. The guards back off and allow Chala and Finn into the code device control room then lock it after them.

Inside Finn plugs the code device in a slot in a console. The console begins scanning him and he is startled. A 3D model of his body in outline pops up with his name over it. Immediately we see his fingertips, eyeballs and brain start to fill in. Chala looks at him and says, "See? This won't hurt a bit!" Then she hits him over the head with her blaster and he is knocked unconscious.

He wakes up in makeshift restraints as Chala does the big reveal and berates him for being a traitor. The console now displays "Chala" and the model of her body is about halfway filled in. He attacks her and they fight while simultaneously playing a strategic game of "capture the flag" over the console. The fight drags on and Finn eventually barely beats Chala and restrains her. He approaches the console to finish the attunement. Then you hear Phasma say, "Hello, Finn." He turns around as she clubs him to the ground. Behind her are the two smiling guards.
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